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The Winds Of Time by ~draesun:icondraesun:



Time passes by quickly and the faintest blow of a problem could knock you off course.
Destiny is fate and fate is destiny.
He is freefalling into the winds of time like a faint heart beating inside the chest of a determined sparrow.
He spreads his wings to glide into the turbulant wind and waits for his destiny to call upon him.
The tired muscles in his shoulders stretch and pull, then relax as they rotate with his golden wings;
the skin under his feathers is frigid, his eyes are heavy and his faith is low.
He pushes harder but begins to fall.
Freefalling into the unknown.

He falls through the clouds, imagining the sun, the warmth it gives him.
He prays for the best but knowns in his chest, where his ever-loving heart reside,
this is his final fall or will something unknown sweep him away, back on the track of sanity?
With his most deep desires spread out in his head, one by one they detach from him and fall away freely into the wind.

Flight enables once again, seconds from the utter end, his strength reacts from his heart within,
his faith has saved him.
He greatfully flies lower and lower until he reaches a small peach tree in the middle of no-where.
At last he's home and landed lightly and on the vivid green tree, where he lay, he slept an eternity and awoke where he would find he was reborn, once again in time.
Time passes quickly and for proof to show, if faith is truly in you, destiny is yours.
©2008-2009 ~draesun
:icondraesun:

Author's Comments

This was done while listening to Explosions In The Sky. I really wanted to create a piece that's both inspiring,spiritual,and calm. I hope that you all like it.

Comments are appreciated.



Thank you!

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WOW!

This is really descriptive. I can actually visualize this.
:D
Great work. ;)

I love the topics of Time and Death.

--
"Death has no friend but Time.
(so remember) Time is on his side, not ours."
~IIIXII
:icondraesun:
Thanks a bunch ^^ It was supposed to be a sort of inspirational thing but I lost interest in it when I got writers block, so I made it sort of errr "emo" or whatever.

--
Raven's Claw Will Always Find A Way::♥
:iconiiixii:
Really? Because it doesn't come off as emo at all.
Its actually very inspirational. Almost like he lets go of what's hindering him and giving him pain (desires) and then he is free. Metaphor being "free" to fly.
I really like it. A lot.

--
"Death has no friend but Time.
(so remember) Time is on his side, not ours."
~IIIXII

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